jeano
Posted : 6/25/2007 2:11:03 PM
I went and looked at your page, Meilani, and I read most of it. But there is so much type and it is so small that it is difficult to read.
Here are a few ideas:
More pictures of what a real Boston Terrier looks like as compared to these junk dogs. It sure looks like the people breeding these "Boston Terriers" of off-color are doing it by adding in small boxer or pit bull. I'd do a head shot to head shot comparison, and then a whole body shot to body shot comparison.
I really appreciated the pictures you have there, though! That first dog is really ugly in the body lines! [Before others get all riled up, I'm not speaking as a mutt-loving dog person, I'm speaking from the point of view that these dogs are being sold as PUREBRED, even SHOW QUALITY for waaaay too much money! There is no way on God's green Earth that that first dog would be allowed in a show! Not as a Boston!]
As far as the text goes here are some tips for websites:
1. Sans serif fonts (like Arial, Impact, Verdana, Trebuchet MS are easier to read. Serif fonts are the ones that have the little feet on them, like Palatino and Times. Those are harder to read online, but easier to read on paper. The reason for that is the way computers render serifs. The little footies (serifs) get kinda blurry and don't lead the eye on the way nice clean serifs do on paper. Bottom line, change your typeface to a sans serif font and it will be much easier to read.
2. I would cut down the verbiage to a minimum to reach the maximum number of folks. Most people won't read that many words. I think you can cut down on it substantially. Be ruthless and leave the most important stuff in without a lot of editorial stuff. It will reach more people that way.
3. Pink typeface is a wee bit hard on the eyes. [sm=eek.gif] I'd pick something a bit more neutral. If you want a color, try dark red, blue, green....
I'm saying these things to give you feedback, not to hurt your feelings! I hope you know that!
As for "advertising" these bogus BTs, nothing could be further from the truth. You are doing the public a service and I applaud you! [sm=clapping hands smiley.gif]