Chariot

    • Gold Top Dog

    Chariot

     Just wrote, needs work, don't know what yet....it's a start.

     Wooden chariot rocking on waves,
     Stolen from the Motherland.
     Forced to leave heritage and home,
     To step on foreign sand.
     
     From jungle sweet, to city stone,
     Language lost and comfort ended.
     The fields they'd hoe, they'd reap, they'd sow,
     Broken hearts unmended.
     
     "Chariot! O! Chariot! Deliver us!"
     They cry.
     Through silent tongue, then music sung,
     To weep upon land dry.
     
     Songs of the children, words of the lost,
     Carried on wind, and wing,
     One voice, one heart, one world, one song,
     Freedom they cry for, they sing.
     
     "Harriet! O! Chariot! Deliver us!"
     They shout.
     Through tunnels and channels, rivers and brambles,
     One chance for freedom to count.
     
     Chariot fly, chariot flit, chariot save the blessed,
     O! Sweet chariot carry us home, save us, let us rest.
     
     Chariot dream, chariot sing, chariot deliver from stone,
     Chariot dash now into heaven....finally...we are home.

     

    • Gold Top Dog

    That is really beautiful.  You are very talented, I'm really in awe of that type of creativity.  Thanks for sharing and keep it up.

    I especially like the last stanza (is that the right term?).

    • Gold Top Dog

    Indeed it is :-)

    I'm generally a short story writer, and rarely delve into poetry....just seemed to have to for this one.

    • Gold Top Dog

    Beautiful! I don't like writting poetry but I love reading it and I lovelovelove this one!

    • Gold Top Dog

    The only poetry I can write is the Japanese 5-7-5 type....I forget what it's called. LOL!

    Your poem is very beautiful, I wish I had the talent to write so well!