Essay on Dogs - Your Opinion wanted

[linkhttp://docs.google.com/View?docid=dd9nn4z8_2f9m5sh]Hi everyone,
[/link]I am in the process of writing an essay on dogs for school. Yes, school

Anyway, i wrote up a draft and i'd be interested in your opinion. Just
let me hear if you got anything to say about it. I'm very open to
constructive criticism, suggestions on additional topics, philosophical
point of views on the whole thing, in particular on the level of
consciousness of these animals and what we can learn from it about
human nature - or whatever pops into your mind really. Please leave out
typos for the moment and consider that english is not my
motherlanguage.

the document can be found under
[linkhttp://docs.google.com/View?docid=dd9nn4z8_2f9m5sh]http://docs.google.com/View?docid=dd9nn4z8_2f9m5sh[/link] i'll add you as
collaborator if you wish so you can edit straight into the document

Anything appreciated