Reactions on a children's story I am writing. The main characters are a cat and a dog.

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    Reactions on a children's story I am writing. The main characters are a cat and a dog.

    Minnie looked around. He let out a kitty sigh, it was just too easy. His owners went to the trouble of shutting all the doors but, the window was wide open. Minnie pawed at the screen. This really was too easy. Boom! The screen fell out the window and Minnie jumped out as well. He landed on his feet and trotted down the street.
       "Meeowow!" he called out to a hotsietotsie looking cat. "Me he-he-he-ow" ::She replied as she stuck her nose up and hurried away. Minnie sighed and guessed that she was out of his league. Oh well, there were more important things on his mind. The Grand- Kitty-Ba had recently put out a warning to all cats. All dogs were apparently in on a plot to take over the world. This had to be stopped now!
      
      Minnie stopped, licked a bit of dirt off of his foot and went on walking. He kept walking a ways intil his little kitty paws started to get tired. He just needed a little rest. He came apon a nice warm spot on the top of a parked car in someone's drive way and settled down for a little nap.
     
      He suddenly awoke with a start! A dog was tied up outside on her leash. She was running and barking and making a big fuss. "You there be quiet, I was sleeping." The dog tilted her head to the side. "Why sleep when there is so much fun to be had? Look a leaf!" The dog barked happily and ran after the leaf until she was very tangled up in her leash. She then lay down and sighed. Minnie hopped down off of the car and strutted over to the dog. "I always heard that dogs were stupid but, not even a dog could be this dumb. You must be one of them." The dog shook her head." I am not "them" I am Bailey!" Minnie tilted his head. Arn't you one of those dogs who are trying to take over the world?" Bailey growled "What do I look like, a cat!?" Minnie shook his head. "Cats are not trying to take over the world." Bailey looked at him. "Accodring to the Grand Canine they are."
     
       Minnie walked over and helped Bailey untangled her self. "Thanks!" Bailey barked. "Shhh!" Minnie hissed. "Do you want the humans to come out!?"
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    (cont.) I am in constant contact with the kitty net work. Are you in contact with the doggie net work?" Bailey nodded and Minnie went on. "They know we won't miss a trick if we stay connected. Someone out there must know that. Don't you see? If someone told The Grand-Kitty-Ba and the Grand Canine the other is trying to take over the world....well the must have done it to keep us occupied so that they could take over....but who?" Bailey sniffed "Im not sure.Maybe rabbits,chipmonks or guniea pigs?" Minnie sighed and shook his head. "No, what would rabbits,chipmonks or guniea pigs gain by taking over the world?" "Im not sure but, what would cats or dogs gain by taking over?" Bailey asked. Minnie grinned a kitty grin. "Everything...." Bailey thought for a moment. " You mean bacon?" Minnie smiled again. " Money - money to buy all the bacon in the world if you wanted it! Also toys, tuna, balls of yarn, lobster,shrimp, dinner bowls, cars, tv sets, plush beds, couches, fridges full of food - You would be in the kibble my friend!" "Wow" Bailey drooled. "With all that money we would be just as well off as the humans Minnie pured."  "Yea just like the humans!" Bailey's tail wagged.
     
    (To be continued.)
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    Well???Who is it? Who is trying to take over the world??? I must know! Which of my pets cant be trusted!!!
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    In my own opinion, if you are writting a book, I would not be posting my story (work) on a public forum.