A song that I have written

    • Bronze

    A song that I have written

    Okay, I made it clear that I love to songwrite and it is my passion and it is something I do everyday. I have people tell me I am good but they are just family. So I am going to post a song that I have written today and I will talk a little about the song and why I wrote it and I will let you tell me what you think of it. Most of my songs are sad and about breaking up because I just got out of a relationship and I am trying to find my happiness again.

        Thanks - Written by Lizzy 7-14-08

    well everyone knows, that im not that bright
    I was a fool to ever think that you wanted to talk to me
    I think you should know that all you put me through
    I should repay you, you taught me so much
    how to not trust, how loose faith, and above all
    how not to love, and I know you won't care but

    Thank you letting me down
    Thank you for saying you would be there
    and never show up
    thank you for keeping me waiting, wasting my life on you
    Thank you for all those broken promises
    scattered on the floor, now I see
    the wake up call woke me up
    thank you, oohhh thank you for making me cry

    Trying to keep all my thought and feelings inside
    I just wanna smack you on the cheek, really hard
    you never cared about my thoughts or feelings
    it was just all a lie, well thank you for the lies
    thank you for this heart acke and above all

    Thank you letting me down
    Thank you for saying you would be there
    and never show up
    thank you for keeping me waiting, wasting my life on you
    Thank you for all those broken promises
    scattered on the floor, now I see
    the wake up call woke me up
    thank you, oohhh thank you for making me cry

    Its to late, this heart already broke
    you can't fix it, no no no
    dont act like you care, I already know you

    my heart is aching
    my tears are pouring
    the lies you filled me up with are racing through my mind
    I wanna tell you off
    but why waste my time, when you don't even care

    Thank you letting me down
    Thank you for saying you would be there
    and never show up
    thank you for keeping me waiting, wasting my life on you
    Thank you for all those broken promises
    scattered on the floor, now I see
    the wake up call woke me up
    thank you, oohhh thank you for making me cry

    Okay, there is my song for my brother who promised me he wouldn't stop being my brother now he never tlaks to me and I miss him. ITs almost mixed in with feelings for my ex-bf. If y'all like it I can post some more songs :)

    • Gold Top Dog

    starry8740

    Okay, there is my song for my brother who promised me he wouldn't stop being my brother now he never tlaks to me and I miss him. ITs almost mixed in with feelings for my ex-bf. If y'all like it I can post some more songs :)

    Your brother??? ex bf...?? No I am pretty sure you nailed my ex in laws and ex husband...  Rolling Eyes Pissed  I wish I could write like that !!

    Bonita of Bwana 

     

    • Bronze
    Thank you so much! I know the spelling is off but spelling is my absoute WORST thing. I am glad you liked it :)
    • Gold Top Dog

     Very nice starry

     

    thanks for sharing