chewbecca
Posted : 2/12/2007 9:16:51 AM
aw, thanks, Ed.
It's quite alright though, I fixed it and am on my last body paragraph. My method statement is: Growing up Jewish in the ghetto of Prague with an abusive father, feeling as though the rest of his family did not love and support him, and his lack of self-worth and almost overwhelming disgust when it came to women were the facets that became Franz Kafka and his beautifully simplistic, yet deeply sad, stories.
To me, that seems more like a thesis, but it's set up more like a method statement, I suppose. I just think method statements are pointless.
I might touch it up a bit so that it's not so long and crowded, but I may get sick of this essay writing stuff and not fix it at all. I can get long-winded and repetitive with my writing (yeah, I know, not me, no. ha!) but I blame this on bad teaching, ha!
Anyway, thanks for wanting to help!